Dance till....

With the dA muro, anyone can make this piece, so before your throw out my critique (like half the people I do critiques for do) at least read on.

Vision: I have the up most respect for older-style architecture instead of this "modern" crap (more like a poor excuse for a cubical holder). So why you would want to burn it is just because you're too lazy to make your own background or be creative and just copied one from Google (or whatever search engine you're in to).

Originality: Now I'm lenient on this category just because I know half the deviants here are just learning how to express who they are. But that doesn't mean I like this piece.

Technique: See header to critique. Plus the anthro figure is too large and should be centered in my opinion.

Impact: There is simply no story here. It's just, "I'm mad as hell." In fact, I was lenient on this one too.

The main reason I gave this a poor critique is I can't find the story. Each and every art piece needs a story, whether it be an abstract to a cartoon. Without a story, your art is as good as dead.

Anyway, just keep working at it and you might find a better critique.